Thank you both so much for your compliments! I'm very new to creative writing (I've done technical writing for years now), inspired solely by Doctor Who, and you've really boosted my confidence about my writing.

I do have to admit, though, that the whole story is already written. I'm rather picky about getting everything right, so I can't actually publish anything that is in a half-done state - I never know when I will want to go back and change something in an earlier chapter. That happened a lot with this; in fact, the second adventure (the one with the psychic aliens) was the last one written.