http://flowsoffire.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] flowsoffire.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shivver 2014-08-03 08:17 pm (UTC)

Oh, this is really great! I loved your characterizations of Hardy and the Doctor, and the descriptions—first Ellie noticing so many details and similarities (she's been looking, hasn't she? Well, never mind, the show doesn't go there ;)), then the Doctor himself playing at it, with the accent and all, commenting merrily on the hairstyle and thoroughly freaking Hardy out. The unspoken moment of tension about his heart was very aptly handled. I just adored the tiny alien creature and the Doctor shushing and reassuring it :D ♥ The interactions were just perfect. Hilarious, with the Doctor being so Doctory, but with that bit of an edge from Hardy. Great work :)

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